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Last edited by Legato on Mon Nov 26, 2012 12:12 am; edited 1 time in total

Girl Talk

The Sytch

"I missed the old menu, it was so simple" Diamondback said while she picked up a coconut frappe

"Thats the price of forming a business empire, they usually expand and change the format" Anna Chase

"I do wonder who has the most business sense between you and Alex" Diamondback asked, she and Anna sit at a open booth near a window"

"Alex mostly but not a slouch myself" Anna said

"How was your trip? Ariel told me" Diamondback asked while taking a sip

Anna fiddled her thumb on her straw" It was good, even when fighting a hord that belonged to an evil cosmic I had a good time"

Diamondback quirked an eyebrow"I know that look" she grinned"You've met someone during your trip haven't you" she took another sip then continued as she finished"Don't try to hide it, I've got a sixth sense of these things"

Anna stammered slightly"I-I'm not sure"then took a sip of her drink

"Does this person feel the same way?" Diamondback asked

"Theres equal interest, I guess it's coming down to who will make the first move" Anna said

"Then make your move. It's not often you get involved with someone from an alien planet" Diamondback said

"It's not that simple" Anna paused then took a deep breath" Lin when was the first time you've felt attracted to someone of the same gender"

(Oh!) Diamondback thought to herself realizing Anna's situation, she thought back to that memory. It was still enough to make her blush" I was around 16, I was still new to the superheroing thing and I was fighting a group of bank robbers then I came across this other superheroine who has the ability to control air"

"Like Whirlwind?" Anna asked

"Yeah but not as advanced"Diamondback nods"We fought off the bank robbers together, we had great chemistry, she had a fun personality. After the battle we started to hang out a little more our friendship grew then in the long run it grew more than that" Diamondback blushed then started to turn into her diamond form to hide it

Anna smiled then placed a hand on hers"Nothing to be ashamed of"

"Theres an old saying you never forget your first love, I still haven't, eventhough I have moved on to other relationships since then" Diamondback said

"Were you nervous?" Anna asked

Diamondback nods" Of course but thats pretty common when one is at the start of a relationship, also when one is sharing their first time with someone they care about. So you've never?"

Anna shook her head"I've kissed but thats about it"

"Just between us girls who was it" Diamondback asked

"It was Roc" Anna admits

Diamondback's eyes went wide, then she started to giggle

"It's not that funny" Anna said with a blush forming

Diamondback cleared her throat then returned to normal form"Of course not. Was it awkward?"

"It was at first, eventhough we both tried to be casual about it, but we became comfortable with it through experience" Anna said

"If it makes you feel any better that wasn't more awkward than the time me and Alex went skinny dipping in the lake of you guys home" Diamondback said as it was enough to cause both heroines to start laughing"How did you manage to pull that off?" Anna asked

"I was just trying to get Alex to loosen up a bit and the lake was there so I figured, why not. You were still having your amazon training at the time and the twins were with Bob visiting the then Princess Sara" Diamondback said" Lets just say he made me almost consider going back to the other side"

Anna quirked an eyebrow"Did the two of you?"

Diamondback shook her head"Oh no, just saying"

"Ah. You didn't have any problems with Psionica did you?" Anna asked

"Pfft no way." Diamondback said then went to the bottom line of the primary subject at hand"If you really like this person and she feels the same way with you then sometimes it doesn't hurt to take a leap of faith"

"Thanks Lin" Anna smiled taking a sip of her drink she continued"Maybe you should have your own talk show"

Diamondback grinned"Tempting but I like my regular day job better"

"Excuse me?"

They both turned to see a couple of customers with one of them asking"Can I have you guys autograph?"

Anna and Diamondback looked at eachother then they both reached in their pockets and pulled out a pen, both saying simotainiously"Who do we make this out to?"

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Rampage
The gang was walking through their territory when a woman ran up to them. "Demolition Girls! Demolition Girls! Please, help me!"
Bulletproof turned to her. "What is it?" Her eyes went wide when she saw that the woman had beaten up and her clothes were torn. "Who did this to you?!"
"The Bloodlust Gang! I-I was taking a walk with my sister an-an-and..." The woman broke down crying.
Bulletproof knelt down next to her. "Relax..it's okay, it's okay now."
"And they...came out of nowhere and attacked us and I got away and they took my sister away!"
"I see, we'll get her back. We'll get her back and kill them all." Bulletproof turned to the others. "Take her back to the hideout and tell Geogirl where I'm going. I'll go on ahead."
The girls nodded and took the girl away with them.
Bulletproof ran off and headed to war.

"Pl-pl-please..." The young woman shuddered and cried. "Please let me go...."
"No way, we ain't letting you go till we're done! Now where'd that sister of yours run off to?"
The gang leader asked as he grabbed the girl's hair, making her yell out. "I DON"T KNOW!"
They were interrupted by the sound of the door being kicked down. A woman walked inside, her body hidden by shadows. She walked into the warehouse, her glowing green eyes staring into the leader's soul. One of the thug's walked over and grabbed her and was promptly smacked across the room and through a brick wall. The woman continued on inside and then snapped the neck of another one. "The woman. Let.Her.Go." She ordered.
"What the f-k? Wast this b-ch!" The gang pulled out various guns and opened fire on her. The bullets pinged off of her body. No matter how much they fired, she was unharmed by the bullets. Bulletproof ran forward and punched one of the thug's and shoving her arm through him. She then tossed him across the room.
As she continued to tear the thug's apart, the woman could only smile. Her sister had made it and got them the help they needed. The Demolition Girls gang leader was here.
"Oh...oh God...oh man....S-s-sh-t." The thug grabbed the girl by her head and shoved a gun to her head. "Hey! Hey you! Back off! Back o-" The thug's voice caught in his throat as he saw Bulletproof covered in the blood and organs of his men. She glared up at him. Her eyes staring into him. She gritted her teeth. "Release her. Now." Bulletproof growled at him and began walking towards him, the blood dripping off of her hands. "I-I-I'll ki-k-kill her...I swear!"
Bulletproof marched towards him.
"I-I-I'll...." The gang leader turned and ran for it.
Bulletproof caught the girl. "Shhhh, shhhhh, it's okay, you're safe now."
Despite everything she had been through, the girl hugged her. "Thank you...thank you...but what about..."
"He won't get far."

Outside, the gang leader screamed and ran to his car. "M-m-m-monster....she's a monster!" He almost reached it when a giant boulder fell down and smashed his car. He screamed and fell on his back and began crawling backwards. "Oh...my...God...What...what the hell are you witches?"

"We're the Demolition Girls. We are the protector's of women in this city. Our specialty is to grind filth like you into the dirt where you belong." Geogirl said as she floated down on a rock.

The gang leader turned to find Bulletproof with an arm around the girl...who was holding a gun to him.

"N-n-no...no wait...please...NO!"

The girl pulled the trigger until it clicked empty.



Later....

Bulletproof and Geogirl watched from a rooftop as the sisters reunited in front of the police station. Officer Jennifer Kingston greeted them and they talked and she took them inside.

"You sure about this?" Geogirl asked.
"Yes. The sister was allowed the killing stroke, but they aren't meant for our life. They have each other and a family to go back to." Bulletproof said.
Geogirl nodded. "You know, you're not as bad as you like us to think you are."
"A momentary laspe I assure you."
"Um...isn't it lapse?"
"That's what I said. So, the warehouse?"
"The girls have taken all the weapons, drugs and money that was in there. Left the bodies."
"Good."
"So what now?"
"Let's go to a bar. Drinks are on me."
"Sound's good." The two headed off to a bar.

Down on the ground level, Leon looked up at the rooftop as the two figure's disappeared. He shook his head and walked inside.

Legato wrote:

Girl Talk

The Sytch

"I missed the old menu, it was so simple" Diamondback said while she picked up a coconut frappe

"Thats the price of forming a business empire, they usually expand and change the format" Anna Chase

"I do wonder who has the most business sense between you and Alex" Diamondback asked, she and Anna sit at a open booth near a window"

"Alex mostly but not a slouch myself" Anna said

"How was your trip? Ariel told me" Diamondback asked while taking a sip

Anna fiddled her thumb on her straw" It was good, even when fighting a hord that belonged to an evil cosmic I had a good time"

Diamondback quirked an eyebrow"I know that look" she grinned"You've met someone during your trip haven't you" she took another sip then continued as she finished"Don't try to hide it, I've got a sixth sense of these things"

Anna stammered slightly"I-I'm not sure"then took a sip of her drink

"Does this person feel the same way?" Diamondback asked

"Theres equal interest, I guess it's coming down to who will make the first move" Anna said

"Then make your move. It's not often you get involved with someone from an alien planet" Diamondback said

"It's not that simple" Anna paused then took a deep breath" Lin when was the first time you've felt attracted to someone of the same gender"

(Oh!) Diamondback thought to herself realizing Anna's situation, she thought back to that memory. It was still enough to make her blush" I was around 16, I was still new to the superheroing thing and I was fighting a group of bank robbers then I came across this other superheroine who has the ability to control air"

"Like Whirlwind?" Anna asked

"Yeah but not as advanced"Diamondback nods"We fought off the bank robbers together, we had great chemistry, she had a fun personality. After the battle we started to hang out a little more our friendship grew then in the long run it grew more than that" Diamondback blushed then started to turn into her diamond form to hide it

Anna smiled then placed a hand on hers"Nothing to be ashamed of"

"Theres an old saying you never forget your first love, I still haven't, eventhough I have moved on to other relationships since then" Diamondback said

"Were you nervous?" Anna asked

Diamondback nods" Of course but thats pretty common when one is at the start of a relationship, also when one is sharing their first time with someone they care about. So you've never?"

Anna shook her head"I've kissed but thats about it"

"Just between us girls who was it" Diamondback asked

"It was Roc" Anna admits

Diamondback's eyes went wide, then she started to giggle

"It's not that funny" Anna said with a blush forming

Diamondback cleared her throat then returned to normal form"Of course not. Was it awkward?"

"It was at first, eventhough we both tried to be casual about it, but we became comfortable with it through experience" Anna said

"If it makes you feel any better that wasn't more awkward than the time me and Alex went skinny dipping in the lake of you guys home" Diamondback said as it was enough to cause both heroines to start laughing"How did you manage to pull that off?" Anna asked

"I was just trying to get Alex to loosen up a bit and the lake was there so I figured, why not. You were still having your amazon training at the time and the twins were with Bob visiting the then Princess Sara" Diamondback said" Lets just say he made me almost consider going back to the other side"

Anna quirked an eyebrow"Did the two of you?"

Diamondback shook her head"Oh no, just saying"

"Ah. You didn't have any problems with Psionica did you?" Anna asked

"Pfft no way." Diamondback said then went to the bottom line of the primary subject at hand"If you really like this person and she feels the same way with you then sometimes it doesn't hurt to take a leap of faith"

"Thanks Lin" Anna smiled taking a sip of her drink she continued"Maybe you should have your own talk show"

Diamondback grinned"Tempting but I like my regular day job better"

"Excuse me?"

They both turned to see a couple of customers with one of them asking"Can I have you guys autograph?"

Anna and Diamondback looked at eachother then they both reached in their pockets and pulled out a pen, both saying simotainiously"Who do we make this out to?"

I actually like this one. Might consider doing a sequel

Legato wrote:

Legato wrote:

Girl Talk

The Sytch

"I missed the old menu, it was so simple" Diamondback said while she picked up a coconut frappe

"Thats the price of forming a business empire, they usually expand and change the format" Anna Chase

"I do wonder who has the most business sense between you and Alex" Diamondback asked, she and Anna sit at a open booth near a window"

"Alex mostly but not a slouch myself" Anna said

"How was your trip? Ariel told me" Diamondback asked while taking a sip

Anna fiddled her thumb on her straw" It was good, even when fighting a hord that belonged to an evil cosmic I had a good time"

Diamondback quirked an eyebrow"I know that look" she grinned"You've met someone during your trip haven't you" she took another sip then continued as she finished"Don't try to hide it, I've got a sixth sense of these things"

Anna stammered slightly"I-I'm not sure"then took a sip of her drink

"Does this person feel the same way?" Diamondback asked

"Theres equal interest, I guess it's coming down to who will make the first move" Anna said

"Then make your move. It's not often you get involved with someone from an alien planet" Diamondback said

"It's not that simple" Anna paused then took a deep breath" Lin when was the first time you've felt attracted to someone of the same gender"

(Oh!) Diamondback thought to herself realizing Anna's situation, she thought back to that memory. It was still enough to make her blush" I was around 16, I was still new to the superheroing thing and I was fighting a group of bank robbers then I came across this other superheroine who has the ability to control air"

"Like Whirlwind?" Anna asked

"Yeah but not as advanced"Diamondback nods"We fought off the bank robbers together, we had great chemistry, she had a fun personality. After the battle we started to hang out a little more our friendship grew then in the long run it grew more than that" Diamondback blushed then started to turn into her diamond form to hide it

Anna smiled then placed a hand on hers"Nothing to be ashamed of"

"Theres an old saying you never forget your first love, I still haven't, eventhough I have moved on to other relationships since then" Diamondback said

"Were you nervous?" Anna asked

Diamondback nods" Of course but thats pretty common when one is at the start of a relationship, also when one is sharing their first time with someone they care about. So you've never?"

Anna shook her head"I've kissed but thats about it"

"Just between us girls who was it" Diamondback asked

"It was Roc" Anna admits

Diamondback's eyes went wide, then she started to giggle

"It's not that funny" Anna said with a blush forming

Diamondback cleared her throat then returned to normal form"Of course not. Was it awkward?"

"It was at first, eventhough we both tried to be casual about it, but we became comfortable with it through experience" Anna said

"If it makes you feel any better that wasn't more awkward than the time me and Alex went skinny dipping in the lake of you guys home" Diamondback said as it was enough to cause both heroines to start laughing"How did you manage to pull that off?" Anna asked

"I was just trying to get Alex to loosen up a bit and the lake was there so I figured, why not. You were still having your amazon training at the time and the twins were with Bob visiting the then Princess Sara" Diamondback said" Lets just say he made me almost consider going back to the other side"

Anna quirked an eyebrow"Did the two of you?"

Diamondback shook her head"Oh no, just saying"

"Ah. You didn't have any problems with Psionica did you?" Anna asked

"Pfft no way." Diamondback said then went to the bottom line of the primary subject at hand"If you really like this person and she feels the same way with you then sometimes it doesn't hurt to take a leap of faith"

"Thanks Lin" Anna smiled taking a sip of her drink she continued"Maybe you should have your own talk show"

Diamondback grinned"Tempting but I like my regular day job better"

"Excuse me?"

They both turned to see a couple of customers with one of them asking"Can I have you guys autograph?"

Anna and Diamondback looked at eachother then they both reached in their pockets and pulled out a pen, both saying simotainiously"Who do we make this out to?"

I actually like this one. Might consider doing a sequel

Sweet.

Speaking of, I have an idea for a sequel to the Bulletproof story from Jennifer's POV.

Lay it on me

i was wondering what this was

so it's like an anthology, that's pretty cool

haha the sytch, nice stories folks

might do one concerning Nemo, iunno, but for now I will reread these two above the post

Froggy wrote:

i was wondering what this was

so it's like an anthology, that's pretty cool

haha the sytch, nice stories folks

might do one concerning Nemo, iunno, but for now I will reread these two above the post

Pretty much an anthology Have fun reading them, it will be worth it

Legato wrote:

Lay it on me

This one takes place in the current timeline in Quantum, with Bulletproof and some of her gang locked up. Jennifer is going through some old files and finds the files on the two girls and remembers that it was the gang that saved them.
Since Bulletproof is more easily available now, she goes to talk to her.
They talk in an interrogation room and while it takes awhile, Bulletproof does open just a bit, giving her some information about the way the gang works, their exclusion of men, and the protection of the women within their territory all while being careful not to give Jennifer anything the police can use against them. She also tells Jennifer they had intended to recruit Ultra Girl, much to Jennifer's chagrin.
When Jennifer questions them about Quantum, Bulletproof says that while she acknowledges how powerful Quantum is, she wants nothing to do with her.
Jennifer finishes by asking Bulletproof what she plans to do if and when she gets out. Bulletproof simply smiles.


Just an idea I had.
Feel free to write it.

Will do. As far as the sequel to Girl Talk I was thinking it could be based on Vamiolos's POV

Legato wrote:

Will do. As far as the sequel to Girl Talk I was thinking it could be based on Vamiolos's POV

Oooh interesting.

Ash to Ashes

Okay, this one isn't so much a story as a trailer for an upcoming arc in Quantum but....

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"The sins of the fathers shall be visited upon their children."

*The Torchbearer's are at an abandoned building that has been burnt and destroyed.*

Ophelia: What are we doing here?

Mariah: The Doc wanted us to check this out, the police are saying there were two meta's fighting in here.

*Shot of the dark interior of the building, a young man falls down a floor onto the ground.*
*Shot of the young man exchanging fire attacks with an unseen opponent.*

Amazonia: Any word from Phoenix?
Derrick: No, the guy hasn't been responding, it's weird.

*Shot of the young man's head being smashed into a wall, there are claws gripping his head. The young man is then flung through the air.*

Specs: Hello, is anybody here?

*The young man is backing away into a corner, panting heavily.*
*The group stops.*

Mariah: No....*

*Ash is found on the ground, beaten to an inch of his life, covered in burns.*

Series of shots.
Hospital nurse: Can you hear me sir?
*Ash's room is on fire at the Academy.*
*Ash in costume is shown fighting a creature at the building, he is loosing.*
*The Torchbearer's are running from an unseen enemy.*

*Ash is shown on the ground, blood dribbling out of his mouth. He is grabbed up by the monster and held up in the air, he is limp.*
Ash: "Wh...why don't you just...kill me?
The Creature: You have not suffered enough boy.

*Mariah is holding up Ash.*
Mariah: CAN YOU HEAR ME?

Creature Voice Over: You will pay for what you stole from me.
*Something drops down from behind the group.*
*Zoom in on Ash's bloody mouth*
Ash:Mariah....run..*
*From behind the group, the creature rises up and we get a good look at it now.*
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs23/i/2008/020/f/5/Pheonix_character_sheet_by_Trollfeetwalker.jpg
*End shot is the creature leaping at the group*

We all have secrets. Some are better left buried.

shit just got real

really real

Froggy wrote:

shit just got real

really real

Damn right it did.

Very good Guy. Not much of a trailer but more like a teaser for an upcoming arc in Quantum


A shot of an abandoned slaughter house




We see the insides of a place where they used to store the meat of the cattle after it has been processed. There were meat hooks dangling everywhere, the chains are stained with blood that is mixed from animal to human.

Shots of a teenaged girl, around 17, dangling from one of the chains. Her clothes appear torn and dirty and she looked as if she has been kept in captivity for a pretty long time. Her hair is over her face but one recognizes that it's indeed Carmilla

Another shot is shown, A woman in a dark purple suit with a dark pink dress shirt and a green tie with black shoes wearing white gloves sits on the ground facing Carmilla"Everyone has a beast within them". We now know that the woman is Lilith, Carmilla's sister. She is cuddling Caroline who appears to be completly enthralled to Lilith's will"Some resist it" Lilith says while stroking Caroline's hair" Some just embrace it" She pulls off her glove then lifts Caroline's head to expose her neck.

Despite her current state Carmilla struggles to break free but the chains are too strong

"Pretty soon"One of Lilith's claws make a small cut to Caroline's neck, it was enough for a small trickle of blood to come down.

Lilith smiled when she hears a growl coming from Carmilla as she licked some of Caroline's blood from her fingers

Carmilla struggles but it's more of a inner struggle. We hear the sound of a heart beat as we see the blood still trickling down the cut Lilith made. We get a shot to Carmilla's eyes it starts to slowly change, but not your usual pure white that one would find but completly dark, then we cut to fangs sprouting from her.

Cut to black

"You will too"

Inner Demon

Legato wrote:

Very good Guy. Not much of a trailer but more like a teaser for an upcoming arc in Quantum


A shot of an abandoned slaughter house




We see the insides of a place where they used to store the meat of the cattle after it has been processed. There were meat hooks dangling everywhere, the chains are stained with blood that is mixed from animal to human.

Shots of a teenaged girl, around 17, dangling from one of the chains. Her clothes appear torn and dirty and she looked as if she has been kept in captivity for a pretty long time. Her hair is over her face but one recognizes that it's indeed Carmilla

Another shot is shown, A woman in a dark purple suit with a dark pink dress shirt and a green tie with black shoes wearing white gloves sits on the ground facing Carmilla"Everyone has a beast within them". We now know that the woman is Lilith, Carmilla's sister. She is cuddling Caroline who appears to be completly enthralled to Lilith's will"Some resist it" Lilith says while stroking Caroline's hair" Some just embrace it" She pulls off her glove then lifts Caroline's head to expose her neck.

Despite her current state Carmilla struggles to break free but the chains are too strong

"Pretty soon"One of Lilith's claws make a small cut to Caroline's neck, it was enough for a small trickle of blood to come down.

Lilith smiled when she hears a growl coming from Carmilla as she licked some of Caroline's blood from her fingers

Carmilla struggles but it's more of a inner struggle. We hear the sound of a heart beat as we see the blood still trickling down the cut Lilith made. We get a shot to Carmilla's eyes it starts to slowly change, but not your usual pure white that one would find but completly dark, then we cut to fangs sprouting from her.

Cut to black

"You will too"

Inner Demon

Awesome as usual dude.

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Very good Guy. Not much of a trailer but more like a teaser for an upcoming arc in Quantum


A shot of an abandoned slaughter house




We see the insides of a place where they used to store the meat of the cattle after it has been processed. There were meat hooks dangling everywhere, the chains are stained with blood that is mixed from animal to human.

Shots of a teenaged girl, around 17, dangling from one of the chains. Her clothes appear torn and dirty and she looked as if she has been kept in captivity for a pretty long time. Her hair is over her face but one recognizes that it's indeed Carmilla

Another shot is shown, A woman in a dark purple suit with a dark pink dress shirt and a green tie with black shoes wearing white gloves sits on the ground facing Carmilla"Everyone has a beast within them". We now know that the woman is Lilith, Carmilla's sister. She is cuddling Caroline who appears to be completly enthralled to Lilith's will"Some resist it" Lilith says while stroking Caroline's hair" Some just embrace it" She pulls off her glove then lifts Caroline's head to expose her neck.

Despite her current state Carmilla struggles to break free but the chains are too strong

"Pretty soon"One of Lilith's claws make a small cut to Caroline's neck, it was enough for a small trickle of blood to come down.

Lilith smiled when she hears a growl coming from Carmilla as she licked some of Caroline's blood from her fingers

Carmilla struggles but it's more of a inner struggle. We hear the sound of a heart beat as we see the blood still trickling down the cut Lilith made. We get a shot to Carmilla's eyes it starts to slowly change, but not your usual pure white that one would find but completly dark, then we cut to fangs sprouting from her.

Cut to black

"You will too"

Inner Demon

Awesome as usual dude.

Thank you How did you like the teaser? To get this out of the way, poor Carmilla, and Caroline also

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Very good Guy. Not much of a trailer but more like a teaser for an upcoming arc in Quantum


A shot of an abandoned slaughter house




We see the insides of a place where they used to store the meat of the cattle after it has been processed. There were meat hooks dangling everywhere, the chains are stained with blood that is mixed from animal to human.

Shots of a teenaged girl, around 17, dangling from one of the chains. Her clothes appear torn and dirty and she looked as if she has been kept in captivity for a pretty long time. Her hair is over her face but one recognizes that it's indeed Carmilla

Another shot is shown, A woman in a dark purple suit with a dark pink dress shirt and a green tie with black shoes wearing white gloves sits on the ground facing Carmilla"Everyone has a beast within them". We now know that the woman is Lilith, Carmilla's sister. She is cuddling Caroline who appears to be completly enthralled to Lilith's will"Some resist it" Lilith says while stroking Caroline's hair" Some just embrace it" She pulls off her glove then lifts Caroline's head to expose her neck.

Despite her current state Carmilla struggles to break free but the chains are too strong

"Pretty soon"One of Lilith's claws make a small cut to Caroline's neck, it was enough for a small trickle of blood to come down.

Lilith smiled when she hears a growl coming from Carmilla as she licked some of Caroline's blood from her fingers

Carmilla struggles but it's more of a inner struggle. We hear the sound of a heart beat as we see the blood still trickling down the cut Lilith made. We get a shot to Carmilla's eyes it starts to slowly change, but not your usual pure white that one would find but completly dark, then we cut to fangs sprouting from her.

Cut to black

"You will too"

Inner Demon

Awesome as usual dude.

Thank you How did you like the teaser? To get this out of the way, poor Carmilla, and Caroline also

I already said it was awesome didn't I?

But seriously, here's hoping the students get a crack at her.

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Very good Guy. Not much of a trailer but more like a teaser for an upcoming arc in Quantum


A shot of an abandoned slaughter house




We see the insides of a place where they used to store the meat of the cattle after it has been processed. There were meat hooks dangling everywhere, the chains are stained with blood that is mixed from animal to human.

Shots of a teenaged girl, around 17, dangling from one of the chains. Her clothes appear torn and dirty and she looked as if she has been kept in captivity for a pretty long time. Her hair is over her face but one recognizes that it's indeed Carmilla

Another shot is shown, A woman in a dark purple suit with a dark pink dress shirt and a green tie with black shoes wearing white gloves sits on the ground facing Carmilla"Everyone has a beast within them". We now know that the woman is Lilith, Carmilla's sister. She is cuddling Caroline who appears to be completly enthralled to Lilith's will"Some resist it" Lilith says while stroking Caroline's hair" Some just embrace it" She pulls off her glove then lifts Caroline's head to expose her neck.

Despite her current state Carmilla struggles to break free but the chains are too strong

"Pretty soon"One of Lilith's claws make a small cut to Caroline's neck, it was enough for a small trickle of blood to come down.

Lilith smiled when she hears a growl coming from Carmilla as she licked some of Caroline's blood from her fingers

Carmilla struggles but it's more of a inner struggle. We hear the sound of a heart beat as we see the blood still trickling down the cut Lilith made. We get a shot to Carmilla's eyes it starts to slowly change, but not your usual pure white that one would find but completly dark, then we cut to fangs sprouting from her.

Cut to black

"You will too"

Inner Demon

Awesome as usual dude.

Thank you How did you like the teaser? To get this out of the way, poor Carmilla, and Caroline also

I already said it was awesome didn't I?

But seriously, here's hoping the students get a crack at her.

Was going to say the same thing concerning your trailer

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Very good Guy. Not much of a trailer but more like a teaser for an upcoming arc in Quantum


A shot of an abandoned slaughter house




We see the insides of a place where they used to store the meat of the cattle after it has been processed. There were meat hooks dangling everywhere, the chains are stained with blood that is mixed from animal to human.

Shots of a teenaged girl, around 17, dangling from one of the chains. Her clothes appear torn and dirty and she looked as if she has been kept in captivity for a pretty long time. Her hair is over her face but one recognizes that it's indeed Carmilla

Another shot is shown, A woman in a dark purple suit with a dark pink dress shirt and a green tie with black shoes wearing white gloves sits on the ground facing Carmilla"Everyone has a beast within them". We now know that the woman is Lilith, Carmilla's sister. She is cuddling Caroline who appears to be completly enthralled to Lilith's will"Some resist it" Lilith says while stroking Caroline's hair" Some just embrace it" She pulls off her glove then lifts Caroline's head to expose her neck.

Despite her current state Carmilla struggles to break free but the chains are too strong

"Pretty soon"One of Lilith's claws make a small cut to Caroline's neck, it was enough for a small trickle of blood to come down.

Lilith smiled when she hears a growl coming from Carmilla as she licked some of Caroline's blood from her fingers

Carmilla struggles but it's more of a inner struggle. We hear the sound of a heart beat as we see the blood still trickling down the cut Lilith made. We get a shot to Carmilla's eyes it starts to slowly change, but not your usual pure white that one would find but completly dark, then we cut to fangs sprouting from her.

Cut to black

"You will too"

Inner Demon

Awesome as usual dude.

Thank you How did you like the teaser? To get this out of the way, poor Carmilla, and Caroline also

I already said it was awesome didn't I?

But seriously, here's hoping the students get a crack at her.

Was going to say the same thing concerning your trailer

Thanks.
I'm planning to use it to expand on Ash's past(s) stretching all the way back to the original 'Ash' and just how he got his Phoenix Powers.

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Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Very good Guy. Not much of a trailer but more like a teaser for an upcoming arc in Quantum


A shot of an abandoned slaughter house




We see the insides of a place where they used to store the meat of the cattle after it has been processed. There were meat hooks dangling everywhere, the chains are stained with blood that is mixed from animal to human.

Shots of a teenaged girl, around 17, dangling from one of the chains. Her clothes appear torn and dirty and she looked as if she has been kept in captivity for a pretty long time. Her hair is over her face but one recognizes that it's indeed Carmilla

Another shot is shown, A woman in a dark purple suit with a dark pink dress shirt and a green tie with black shoes wearing white gloves sits on the ground facing Carmilla"Everyone has a beast within them". We now know that the woman is Lilith, Carmilla's sister. She is cuddling Caroline who appears to be completly enthralled to Lilith's will"Some resist it" Lilith says while stroking Caroline's hair" Some just embrace it" She pulls off her glove then lifts Caroline's head to expose her neck.

Despite her current state Carmilla struggles to break free but the chains are too strong

"Pretty soon"One of Lilith's claws make a small cut to Caroline's neck, it was enough for a small trickle of blood to come down.

Lilith smiled when she hears a growl coming from Carmilla as she licked some of Caroline's blood from her fingers

Carmilla struggles but it's more of a inner struggle. We hear the sound of a heart beat as we see the blood still trickling down the cut Lilith made. We get a shot to Carmilla's eyes it starts to slowly change, but not your usual pure white that one would find but completly dark, then we cut to fangs sprouting from her.

Cut to black

"You will too"

Inner Demon

Awesome as usual dude.

Thank you How did you like the teaser? To get this out of the way, poor Carmilla, and Caroline also

I already said it was awesome didn't I?

But seriously, here's hoping the students get a crack at her.

Was going to say the same thing concerning your trailer

Thanks.
I'm planning to use it to expand on Ash's past(s) stretching all the way back to the original 'Ash' and just how he got his Phoenix Powers.

Looking forward to it. Mine isn't really looking at expanding to Carmilla's past but more like look into Carmilla's twisted family history.

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Very good Guy. Not much of a trailer but more like a teaser for an upcoming arc in Quantum


A shot of an abandoned slaughter house




We see the insides of a place where they used to store the meat of the cattle after it has been processed. There were meat hooks dangling everywhere, the chains are stained with blood that is mixed from animal to human.

Shots of a teenaged girl, around 17, dangling from one of the chains. Her clothes appear torn and dirty and she looked as if she has been kept in captivity for a pretty long time. Her hair is over her face but one recognizes that it's indeed Carmilla

Another shot is shown, A woman in a dark purple suit with a dark pink dress shirt and a green tie with black shoes wearing white gloves sits on the ground facing Carmilla"Everyone has a beast within them". We now know that the woman is Lilith, Carmilla's sister. She is cuddling Caroline who appears to be completly enthralled to Lilith's will"Some resist it" Lilith says while stroking Caroline's hair" Some just embrace it" She pulls off her glove then lifts Caroline's head to expose her neck.

Despite her current state Carmilla struggles to break free but the chains are too strong

"Pretty soon"One of Lilith's claws make a small cut to Caroline's neck, it was enough for a small trickle of blood to come down.

Lilith smiled when she hears a growl coming from Carmilla as she licked some of Caroline's blood from her fingers

Carmilla struggles but it's more of a inner struggle. We hear the sound of a heart beat as we see the blood still trickling down the cut Lilith made. We get a shot to Carmilla's eyes it starts to slowly change, but not your usual pure white that one would find but completly dark, then we cut to fangs sprouting from her.

Cut to black

"You will too"

Inner Demon

Awesome as usual dude.

Thank you How did you like the teaser? To get this out of the way, poor Carmilla, and Caroline also

I already said it was awesome didn't I?

But seriously, here's hoping the students get a crack at her.

Was going to say the same thing concerning your trailer

Thanks.
I'm planning to use it to expand on Ash's past(s) stretching all the way back to the original 'Ash' and just how he got his Phoenix Powers.

Looking forward to it. Mine isn't really looking at expanding to Carmilla's past but more like look into Carmilla's twisted family history.

Coolness, looking forward to it.

Carmilla's family is so loving >_>

jk but man talk about a sibling rivalry

This is actually a pretty cool read. Can't wait to see how this plays out.

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This is actually a pretty cool read. Can't wait to see how this plays out.

Thanks for the feedback Kev You ain't seen nothing yet